This is my genie story. My writing goal is I write different sentences with different beginnings. Do you think I have used different beginnings? I can't wait to read your comments.
Well done Taryn. You have written a great story about what you would do with three wishes. Your ending sentence is great. You would definitely be happy if you had three wishes granted! I can see that you have used some different sentence beginnings. Great work on your goal. From Mrs O
Well done Taryn. You have written a great story about what you would do with three wishes. Your ending sentence is great. You would definitely be happy if you had three wishes granted! I can see that you have used some different sentence beginnings. Great work on your goal. From Mrs O
ReplyDeleteWell done Taryn great story I think it would be neat if we could have three wishes :)
ReplyDeleteLove Mum